Hi,
Here's my assignment. I have to admit that at first, I had some trouble to SEE what was "wrong" or could be improved on most images, where the contrast (at first sight) seem ok.
This one did puzzled me a lot. I'm not fully satisfied with the result:
With this one, I started to really see the pattern. The tree in the foreground-right should be darker. The mid-ground on the left and where the shake is standing has been darken (I could see the the trace were it was photoshoped) :p I have played with the trees on the background to see if I could give them a feel of "closer / farther" by making them more or less light.
This one, I thought was a typical example where the the colors are contrasted, but not the values. I have darkened the purple shadows, lightened the brown wood.
This one, the dark mass on the left has been lighten, so I have darkened it. I wasn't sure if I should have darken a little more on the water in the foreground, I was afraid to remove the emphasis on the characters and the narrative moment of their discovery...
I thought this one was rather obvious, her skin and probably her hair has been darken:


This one, I have boosted the light and contrast overall the image, but kept the sofa area on the left darker (not the main attraction) ;o)
Oups, some new images to do...
Part II
This one did puzzled me a lot. I'm not fully satisfied with the result:
This one, I found easier to see what I could do better. The foreground rocks are the same value than the mid-ground ones, so I have lighted the mid-ground and darken the foreground. I also thought the sky, for such a highlight, was too dark. Also, when we see the moon during the day, the dark side of the moon is the same color as the sky; we only see a faint white highlight. The contrast of this planet + moon are so strong, that they feel like if they were a big starship hovering above the ground, not like if they were afar in the sky. Finally, I have amused myself to put some ray of light to highlight the character, though I have conscience that it's a little drama-cheezy ;)
With this one, I started to really see the pattern. The tree in the foreground-right should be darker. The mid-ground on the left and where the shake is standing has been darken (I could see the the trace were it was photoshoped) :p I have played with the trees on the background to see if I could give them a feel of "closer / farther" by making them more or less light.
This one, I thought was a typical example where the the colors are contrasted, but not the values. I have darkened the purple shadows, lightened the brown wood.
This one, the dark mass on the left has been lighten, so I have darkened it. I wasn't sure if I should have darken a little more on the water in the foreground, I was afraid to remove the emphasis on the characters and the narrative moment of their discovery...
I thought this one was rather obvious, her skin and probably her hair has been darken:

For this one, a small adjustment to darken/reduce contrast in the wheat field (not what we wish to highlight) and put a soft light on her skirt, so it may out-stand the background:


Oups, some new images to do...
Part II









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