Feedback- Claire's

Hi Claire you may want to use a limited palette but instead having black&white + one colour you may change the grey scale to another colour, the whole thing will look more full colour rendering. I use -selective colour- in Image adjustment and  pick Black in roll down menu , adjust it  more green(in this sample here). Then I did the same with Grey. May need desaturate a little the Green in  Image at the end.

About the small figure, don't forget the lesson about using the clear silhouette for better eye reading. especially for this   tiny figure .  the light in the front of the spider should not as strong as the torch.

One more thing,

in Selective colour, you can choose White in drop down menu and adjust  it to more blue.

Feedback- Noah's

Good work, I like the effect of the light behind those leaves, good mood. Just some little retouches here and there as you can see here

Nice atmosphere. I gived a  little stronger light in the 2zones of candles, some stronger accents on those silhouettes. More modification for the 2 guys in forground ( one looks like taking photo, the other the head is a little big)

Final - Color

Here is the final of my spider piece--

Final - Colour

Still a work in progress but I thought I'd see if I can get any feedback on things I should make sure to focus on as I continue.

Here's some of the other pieces I've also done

Feedback: Brimrun's

Good work BrimRun. The Giant scene coming nicely,  just to be picky I added some little light here and there in the group of people and some darker accents.
The 2nd image, the treatment of the hair is very nice. I just have some suggestions for the face.
Cheers.

week 10??- Brimrun

Hii, so I think the drawing ready for the vernissage. Please let me know if you think I should fix anything before I send it :) 

Also I want to send this one too if that's alright.

FINAL (George)

Thank you all for the class! I had a lot of fun and I learned so much during this semester. Unfortunately, I won't be taking another one any time soon so I guess that's how far I've reached!

This is my comparison of my paintings before and after this class

BEFORE (drawing with mouse):

AFTER (drawing with tablet in class):

Hope you all keep working on your art endeavors!

George

Using Light tone and Highlight

Feedback

Week 9 - try 2 - simon

Week 9 Alex

So I completely restarted..

Fist Color Test

Skin Tone test - Colors seemed good but forms we're a little sloppy.

Second Skin Tone Test - Better for but the lighting is too dramatic I think. 

week 10 Mauricio

Week 9 (Andrew)

I think I've worked the piece to a point where I am content with it, however any feedback would still be appreciated for finishing touches, thanks!

Week 9 (Claire)

I plan to do color next week :) Originally I was going to have things like spider eggs or cocoons peppering the area, but it made it feel a bit too busy.

Week 9_Yutong

Week 9 - Simon

I tried a new method to save my photoshop files,  I hope it will show up well on the projector :DI decided to start on a new creature painting.... because i felt like it... It also helps to keep my ideas fresh... But i might have spent a bit too much time on that one and not enough on the main one..... Oh well

Final Week - Tarik

Ok, so I didn't like pretty much anything about my previous painting, Too many issues to solve and not enough skills to solve them.
So I re-fired something, basically a re-design of an old C-RPG character.

Still a lot of work on the background, and rendering of hands, sword and face. Adding more details, scratches and everything. But I don't feel good about the foreshortening of the front leg...

Any feedback would be appreciated.

Thx guys !

Week 9. -Brimrún

Hi, so I have just been adding details this week, I feel like I can work more on the sea and the sky.

Final (Jeremie)

Final week - WIP (Démie)

Ok, so what is about done: 

• Head of the dragon
• Horse
• Link (the rider)

What is not finished yet:

• Dragon's body
• Landscape and bridge (lots of contrast / saturation / texture (on the bridge) to be done still; shadow on the bridge to be adjusted too)
• Atmospheric touch-ups

I hope the contrast is ok. I'm afraid I might have pushed the contrast too strong on the dragon's head... And it's not "right" yet on the background.